Summer Time and the Living is…

except, with more rain and less sand

That last gap there? That was finals. Being a college student, or any student, means life spikes around the end of semesters. Life gets swept up in papers and testing and you hardly get a chance to notice the seasons changing.

Hopefully, now that I’m settled out of school for the summer I hope the to get this blog back in action, starting with the twice a week posting I promised.

I’m going to do my best to hit all the categories for you as I go. But for this post, I’m going to do a speed run.

Exercise: Fiction: Take an idea you have or a story you have written and write it like a screenplay – all dialogue and action, no internal states or thoughts.

Genre/Form: Twisted Realism/Magical Realism is a genre known by many names. The basic concept is this – take one element that is unnatural and insert it into the normal, every day world. A ghost who instead of killing of the inhabitants of a house, makes things go stale faster. A parking garage where change vanishes from cars.  A mermaid that lives in a local pool.

Links and Recommendations: WATCH THE AVENGERS. Seriously. Pay attention to character, little things that make relationships and character work. How does this movie keep the ensemble together. Joss Weadon is an amazing writer and those are his strengths.

Professionals: William Faulkner famously said: Murder your Darlings – don’t hold too tightly to any part of your writing. If someone tells you to cut something, you have to be willing to consider their advice

Prompts: A race; coloring; disappointment; a false witness; a teaching assistant given more work and power than they should be.

Prompts! Fresh off the Press!

smiling woman looking up at lightWords: Ring, Appropriate, Symbol, Broken, Coat, Able, Ten, Windowpane

Locations/Settings: Bus stop; Post office; Public Swimming Pool; Shared Hotel Room; Open field

Characters: Someone in the wrong time (either era or just time zone); An old idealist; a new doctor; an atheistic preist; a son following in the footsteps of his father; a caregiver; a child less than five years old

Opening Lines: She tossed her things on the ground and started to cry; She was almost finished when there was a knock on the door; No one was meant to find out; The snow dazzled him every time; He was tired of waiting;

Symbols/Motifs: Doors and doorways; Wind and air; Fruit (The Metamorphosis) ; Eyes (The Great Gatsby); Specific colors (The Scarlet Letter); Hair; Cars

 

Schedule Update: Lofty goals vs. Reality

When I set up this blog, I intended to give you all something every day, whether it be an idea or a piece of advice or a recommendation. That was the goal, the idealistic hope for this blog. It still is, really, it is what I hope to ultimately accomplish, between the technology offered by wordpress and having more time on my hands. But as it stands, that is simply not possible, between school, other commitments, and everything else life has been throwing my way. I don’t want to put things up that aren’t quality, and, as a result, I don’t get as many posts up as I would like.

As of now, I am going to be cutting down my goal to two posts a week, and I will be more or less cycling through the different kinds of posts. I am truly sorry I couldn’t keep up with the goal of daily posts and hopefully over the summer I can work back up to that. Right now, I am going to be focusing extra hard on getting you at least two posts a week, every week.

Please let me know in the comments what kinds of posts you’d like to make sure I get up and I will definitely keep that in mind.

Hope you’ll all stick around!

Overcoming Writer’s Block with io9.

Because it is technically Wednesday (technically, in some places), today’s link dips a bit into genre as well. In case any of you don’t know what io9.com is yet, it is a news, advice, and review site focused on things that matter to science fiction (and fantasy) geeks. Their motto – “We’re from the Future.”

I recently ran across an article on ways to overcome different types of writers block on their site and I thought I’d link it to you. So here it is:

http://io9.com/5844988/

If this article doesn’t spark a story or get you over a hump in writing, browse the rest of the site. Check out the new science news – imagine inventions or worlds they might inspire. Check out their reviews of different recent films, books, and television shows. Click around! If you find something fun, feel free to share it in the comments!

Bad News, Good News, and your Weekly Prompts

The bad news isn’t really that bad, and it should be pretty clear already — I still don’t have this darn queuing system figured out. But the good news is, as a result, we should be good on posts this week! Hopefully, it was just a date mix up on my part – human error is sometimes the easiest to fix. I should get the link/rec post up tonight, even if I have to do it manually. Or the online equivalent, which I suppose just involves more button pushes. It isn’t really “manual” is it?

Well, enough of that. On to prompts!

pacifier on the ground Words: Wire; Nightfall; Armchair; Underneath; Quickly; Endgame; Fortified.

Objects: hard-hat; Stained-glass window; price tag; envelope; rubber ball; single earring; backpack.

Phrases: Clean and simple; contact us for further information; in isolation; small bits.

Dialogue: “I read it somewhere.”; “I have to go.”; “Maybe later.”; “We talked about this already.”; “You could do that…”

Characters: Young single mother; stay at home father; harried graphic designer; aging bohemian; aspiring actor/actress; new rising employee in Fortune 500 company; Mother/father of successful musician; Son/Daughter of a factory worker.

Please leave a comment about your favorite types of prompts so I can make sure to include those every week!

More Than your Average dictionary

DictionaryMost dictionary work like this: You know a word, but not what it means, so you go alphabetically until you find it. Dictionaries are great tools for when you are reading and stumble across an unknown word, but they are a lot less helpful when you’re the one doing the writing. Until now.

onelook.com is a different kind of Dictionary. Sure, you can use it to look a the meaning of a word, but you can also use it as a reverse-dictionary, where you look up a word based on its meaning. This is the perfect tool for getting at the word on the tip of your tongue. It’s also great to check for terms you may not know. For example, you might not have known that there was a more technical word for “wine maker” (vintner). It isn’t perfect (searching assistant cook doesn’t give me sous-chef) but it is certainly a useful tool.

There is more the site can do as well. It can give you all words starting or ending a certain way (*ing, *down) or starting a certain way (re*, under*) or help you fill in missing letters (fev?r). You can even do topic searches ( :beach).

It’s a fun tool. Check it out. Play around. Bookmark it for later, too!

Prompts, again.

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Words: Lost, Temple, Program, Year, Counter top, Fringe

Phrases: A moment of regret; I’m weak that way; There are things you can’t control; How long will it last?

Dialogue: “Let’s drink to it!”  “That wasn’t me.” “Is that what I think it is?” “Let’s look over here.”

Objects: A pillow: An empty jar; A bowl of cereal; a muddy footprint; A wig.

Settings: On a political campaign bus; Setting up for a concert; On a construction site; At or After a friends wedding

Begging your Pardons

I would like to apologize profusely for the long absence. The funny thing about being creative writer is ending up in situations like this, were I have a hundred and three metaphors to explain myself and no straight forward answer. Here, try a few on for size:

See, I got you a teddy bear. With a heart on it!

  • Sometimes the tides sweep in too quickly and it takes all you’ve got to just stay afloat.
  • You can only cook so many meals in a week with only two working burners on the stove.
  • Every season, there are some apples on the tree we don’t get too picking before they fall and the worms get ’em.

Any of those?

No matter. I’ve been told that no one is interested in excuses anyway. I have resolved to teach myself the queuing system on WordPress so I can avoid such droughts in the future, whether they be caused by the tide, faulty burners, or just not enough time.

Thank you to everyone who stuck around, and I will start the flow of content up ASAP.

Stacking conflict

ImageThe second you let the novel take a breath, you run the risk of losing your audiance. It is the same in poems. If you let the tension lag, however you’ve built it up, you let the reader get lazy and wander off. It’s okay to give characters a break, but never for too long. A real sense of conclusion or safety is just not interesting – it’s when you get movies that cut ahead, time jumps – or surprise new problems. Characters really do never catch a break. Something must keep driving them, and thus, the novel.

It definitly makes the audiance feel for them. Think about your favorite hero or heroine. What’s the longest pause they got? What was still looming on their personal horizon?

As a writer, you have to keep the tension up. I am plotting out a novel now, and I have a huge swath of time where the characters are thrown together. I have t marked for character growth and interpersonal relationships – but the more I think about this, the more I pitch it to friends and fellow writers, the more I realize that this section cannot stand. There are no support beams. Without a driving conflict or action, it falls. Of course, character growth is something intensely important. You should never neglect relationships for action, but your relationships might not be able to hold the novel on it’s own.

I’ve been thinking about this because I somehow managed to get sick because I stayed up to late trying to finish a paper. I was up late because I had been sick previously and didn’t get as much done as I wanted. Because I am sick again, I am behind on blog posts. It’s a stacking conflict. It’s the kind of stacking conflict that is self perpetuating, and as the crazy writer I am, I got to thinking about how that’s an interesting plotting exercise.

How can you keep action up, keep the plot tense, by using the characters own actions to perpetrate further conflict? It can be something simple, like my life around midterms, or something very dangerous, like the plot of No Country for Old Men by Cormac McCarthy, where lives are on the line.

Lie to Me

When is it okay not to tell the truth? Is any non-truth a lie? Write about a lie. It could be from your life or not, it could be real or not. Why is the lie told? Is it told with good intent or to cause harm? Does it accomplish that goal? Who is affected? If no one finds out, can the one who told the lie live with it? What happens if someone finds out the truth?

When an actor or actress is looking for motivations on stage, we are often told to pick the strongest choice, the most extreme situation. That may or may not work for you as a writer. Try both out. An affair and a stolen cookie. A murder and which color drapes look best. See which works most comfortably. Try things in between. Remember, a story should have some sort of conflict.

Bonus: Look into the unreliable narrator, either as the primary narrator of a story or as the teller of a tale. What does that do to the reader? To the medium of story telling? Why do you trust what a narrator tells you?

Person of Interest: Part 1

Again, sorry for the spotty posting. This one is important though and a bit on the technical side. I’m going to do a quick rundown of first person this week. Next week, I hope to do the second part of the series on third person.

FIRST PERSON:

First person (I, me, my, myself…) is telling a story from the eyes and mouth or hand of a character. 99.9% of the time, first person is also singular (notable exception: A Rose for Emily by Faulkner). It is perhaps the most natural way for both the writer and the reader to really get into a character’s thought patterns. Seeing the first person, for a reader, signals that all of the words are from the perspective of a person, through their eyes, ears, and from their mind. As such, it is a great way to establish voice – readers are most willing to “hear” your narrator in the first person, because it sounds like he or she is telling a story. First person narrations have to be especially clear with their voice, because readers are paying attention to it. The text can only use words and phrases that the first person character would know. On the plus side, you get a quick sense of mood, tone, and place, on the minus side, a failure to grasp tiny details could be really jarring to the reader.

Another big plus of first person is the tightness in which it sticks to one point of view – by this I mean that first person, because it is inherintly a narration of thought as much as action, really pulls the reader along a specific train of thought. This is perhaps why first person is so popular in mystery and detective stories – it allows the author intimate control over the details the reader pays attention to, and allows them to do so naturally. While this works very well for times when the character has to figure things out, it can be hard when the character is already “in the know.” Comparitively few science fiction and fantasy stories are written in the first person, because the first person is much harder to work with when you need to use exposition or explination. Think of it as such – the reader of a science fiction novel needs to know that the quantum tunnels, say, allow for faster than light travel. But, an experianced space commander would never say “I used the quantum tunnels to get there faster than sublight speed travel would allow.” That would be the equivalent of us saying “I drove to the mall to get there faster than walking would allow.” We could say that, but in normal everyday speech, that would sound very silly.

There are ways around this, of course, which brings us to common uses of the first person. The most obvious is the straight narritive – a person telling the story as it is happening (can be present or past – but more on that another time) – the problem here, of course, is that if the character loses consiousness or dies, you might end up in a corner. As will all first person accounts, nothing that happens when the first person character is off screen can be shown, only told in relay. The other very common way to use the first person is the way it is used in To Kill A Mocking Bird by Harper Lee – as a retrospective. This form gives away a bit of the end (the fate of the character) often at the begining, but allows for the first person to be a reflective voice, rather than an immediate one. The bulk of the story, in this case, is told in the past tense. You will probably want to keep any scenes that take place at the narrators current age in the present to avoid tense confusion.

Another use of first person that seems really popular among some big name authors (Fitzgerald, Conrad, Kipling, Doyle) which is to have the story told in the first person, but to keep the first person narrator off to the side of the main dramatic action. In the The Great Gatsby our narrator follows the main actors around and comments on them, though he is ostensibly part of their social life. In many of Conrad’s works, the first person narrator was not their for most of the adventure and is simply relaying a story told to them. In his and Kipling’s work, the narrators role in the dramatic events is often limited to less important events at the beginning or end of the main arc which they only become privy to later. Doyle famously has Watson, the sidekick, documenting the adventures he had with Sherlock in the first person, but keeping Sherlock squarely in the limelight.

Tune in next week for Third Person!

As always, please leave any questions or comments and I’ll try my best to get back to you.

Weekly Prompts 2

As last time, there are no rules for the prompts. Just smash ideas together until something explodes.

Picture:
  Actions: Turning off the television; Sitting down; Unlocking a door; Starting a fire.

Characters: A ballet student; a street vendor; a medical student; a police recruit; a first time grandmother.

Words: Speech, forgive, blind, stomach, cliff, sting, slow, bleach, awe, tulip

Begin a story with: I remember…; I don’t remember…; He never came back…; It wasn’t supposed to happen…; This is one of those stories where…; I don’t normally…

Settings: A snow covered field; a friend’s bedroom; a dirty kitchen; a playground; a hospital waiting room

Objects: A roll of money; a broken doll; lipstick; a notebook; earplugs; a nail; a violin

Phrases: She kicked the ball over; I think I’m going to be sick; The room was quiet when we entered; Shut that dog up!; An snowman’s chance in hell.

 

As with last time, let me know what works so I can keep using the kind of prompt you like!

 

We Interrupt Your Regularly Scheduled Program To…

…Apologize for the lack of posts of late.

I have been a bit under the weather and I have a bunch of midterm papers and tests coming up, so the forcast is still a bit spotty. I will try my best to keep getting these updates to you despite it all and normal updates should continue next week.

I’ve been thinking, while sucking on lozenges and sipping tea, about interruption. A friend of mine and I were talking about pushing through school and college and then getting a job. About how weekends have become work days for us, and about how much we are going to miss winter break and summer break after graduation. Feeling sick lately really made me aware of how little we get to stop and slow down. When something does interrupt our programmed life, our going to classes, our going to work, how do we react?

Because this is a writing blog after all, let me turn it into a prompt or exercise:

Write about a characters life being interrupted by something unexpected: sickness, death, pregnancy, a new arrival or departure, a firing, an accident. It can be something big or small, a permanent setback or just a temporary sick leave. How does this impact different types of people? Do they try to work anyway? Do they welcome it, take advantage of the situation?

An interruption is a great way to grow your characters in a longer piece. It’s a fun way to show an established character in a new light. Interuptions also fling the people around the character into different and revealing roles – a child who must become caretaker, a retired parent who has to go back to work, a co-worker who becomes a friend.

Well, best of luck to anyone else facing midterms or any kind of interruption. I’ll get your prompts up soon.

It was a Dark and Stormy Night…

Conventional writing wisdom says never to start a story with the weather.

How can you use weather effectively in your writing? How can you best avoid the dangerous cliches associated with storms and snow, etc.
Some of the greats use weather in ways that ring of cliche. Do they get away with it? Does the ending of James Joyce’s “The Dead,” earn the snow it uses? What about Orwell’s “It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen”
Does Mary Shelley earn her “It was on a dreary night of November that I beheld the accomplishment of my toils.” At the beginning of Chapter 6 of Frankenstein? Did you know that this was where she first intended the novel to start?
Weather can be a catalyst for events, such as a flood, a drought, or a freeze.
It can be a backdrop that sets the mood.
Occasionally, (and when it most runs into cliche) weather is used as a metaphor. Be really careful with that one.
PROMPTS:
Write a story or poem in which weather plays a large role. Play around with weather as both an active influence and a more passive one. Have you turned it into a metaphor? Does that work?
Find a scene, story, or poem with a setting that you have written, or one from a work you like. If the passage has one type of weather, what would change if that weather changed? If there is no stated weather, what weather do you think is in the background? What would the effect of different conditions have on the scene.

 

Top 5 Reasons to Read and Write Poetry

(For some reason, Wednesday’s post didn’t, well, post. So sorry for the delay. You get two today!)

I am not a poet

And I am not just saying that to be contrary. I’m really not. I fall pretty squarely on the prose side of things. Occasionally I’ll wade in as far as prose poetry, duck my head under and try some free verse, but I can pretty safely say that I am not a poet.

I’ve met a lot of prose writers like myself who are pretty confident in our non-poem writing identity. Sometimes, we put down poetry, joke about poets, and belittle the form. I’m guilty of throwing a few blows for my end of the prose vs. poetry war.

But when the dust settles, there is a lot we can learn from each other. In this post, I’ll talk about what us prose writers can learn from those on the poetic side of the trenches.

5) Sound – Poetry sometimes drops the pretext of trying to mean something pretty and goes for sounding pretty. Sometimes, a poem values meaning over sound, sometimes it values sound over meaning, but no poem doesn’t care about sound. I do know some prose writers who don’t care at all about sound, and that is one place poetry has us beat. Poets (at least the pre-modernist poets) know their work is one of sound as well as type. In some languages, the word for song and poem are one in the same because of this. From poetry, we learn that the individual sounds that make up words and phrases are not just cerebral building blocks, but parts of the reading and listening experience. The difference between “Slice” and “Chop” are in sound. As prose writers, we need to learn to hear the difference.

4) Emotion – Poems often set out to evoke specific emotions. They keep that emotion in mind in every aspect of the piece. It is one way that they have audience in mind that prose writers often forget.  It is very useful to know what emotion you want to elicit out of your reader and to aim for it with every tool in your tool box. The strong association between poetry and emotion and the weaker emphasis on a logical progression of narrative allow poets to put more focus on directing their readers gut level feelings. But us prose writers should really still remember how important those emotion are. They dictate whether the reader keeps going, whether they like a character, or feel comfortable with a setting. Poetry can teach us the language of emotion.

3) Word Real Estate – Poems, with the expection of epic poetry, are shorter. They have inherently less space to do what they want to get done. As such, every word becomes something of value. When critics pick apart a poem, they look at each punctuation mark, each pronoun. No one looks that closely at a novel. This attention to detail, required by the poetic form, makes poetry a great platform for learning how to make every word count. You hear that advice a lot from professional writers, but it really starts to mean something when you try to write a Haiku, a Sonnet, or Blank Verse.

2) Rhythm – This specific component of sound is incredibly important. Even the rare reader who doesn’t sound out the text in their head at some level still pauses at commas, pays more attention at quotation marks, and is hyper aware of exclamation marks and question marks. Paragraph breaks and section breaks structure the prose piece like line breaks work in a poem. But what the prose writer forgets is that even the sentence has rhythm. Any student of the English Sonnet can tell you that English fits most naturally into Iambic Pentameter, but as prose writers, we often forget to read over our work out loud to hear where the language catches, where pauses need to be, where we need to chop things up for emphasis. Poetry teaches us how language naturally flows and how we can manipulate that flow for impact, a lesson that holds true even in the middle of a Space Opera.

1) The Power of the Word – Over all, the greatest gift of poetry is to teach the writer that no word is powerless. When used correctly, or with purpose, a single word can turn a poem. Because of the (good) poet must consider each words sound, emotional connotation, effect on rhythm, and thematic ties, he or she learns just how strong each word is. The poet is a student not of words or language, but of each word. A poet needs to know what each word evokes, what allusions it calls to mind, what phonetic qualities it has. Once you know a word that deeply, you (hopefully) never just throw it into a prose paragraph again.

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